Last weekend I had a date with my girlfriend , we had a lot of fun , we went for a movie and later we stopped for a candle dinner in a good looking restaurant. I asked her “ What would you like?” , she said “ I would vegetarian pizza” , I said “ I will have steak “. When our waiter gave us our food my girlfriend suddenly said “ Look this food is dirty”. She was absolutely right the big ugly fly was on a top of my steak.
I called our waiter and asked him to give me another steak but he said “ I can change your food but we will charge you extra price”. After his words I lost my temper , I started yelling at him and insist that they change my food without any extra cost. When I saw that our argument useless I asked him to call his manager since I want to talk with him. When he went to call manager my girlfriend said me “ Ok this is enough for me I’ll go” and she had gone I tried to stop her but I couldn’t she was very angry. I came back in restaurant, talked with manager they of course didn’t charge me for food but my date that begun so good at the end was ruined .
The story is built very nicely, precise, to the point. It has introduction, body and conclusion. Quotation is exhibited. There are some punctuation mistakes though.
ReplyDeleteI would advice to elaborate the situation with the girl. Why she decided to leave? What made her mad?